Local Revision: Passive and Active Voice

Earlier, I looked at the verbs used in my post and analyzed their tense and how often each verb was used. So, are my verbs interesting and specific, or too broad and general to be exciting?

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Active (Specific)	Active (General)	Active (General)	Passive
Rises Notice Forced Ignite Singeing Alleged Criticized Discovered Misquoting	Heard Step Coming Starting Ensuring Runs Taking Standing Becoming Begins Look See Heading See Following Run Landed Find Lying Pick Feel Knowing Burned Began Operating Surpassing Operated Invested Sitting Houses Reflect	Turned Operating Provide Heard Caused Shown Reach Ran Killed Starting Citing Reviewed Lobbied Stay Dig Finding Lies Included Responded Researching Estimated Published Found Studied Allowing Predict Show Remains Reducing Making Remain	Be - 2 Are - 4 Will - 2 Was - 5

When looking over this list, I realize that my guide is inundated with general active verbs rather than their more descriptive counterparts. Based on this knowledge, I would try to incorporate more specific verbs into the piece so that the reader has a better mental picture of the story based upon what they're reading.