Sunday, February 21, 2016

Local Revision: Tense Usage

When writing any document, it's important to keep your verb tenses consistent, but still show the reader the whole picture. How did my draft accomplish this?


O'Shea, Pete "Writing Tools" 4/8/11 via flickr. Public Domain.


Past Tense
Present Tense
Future Tense
Heard
Landed
Burned
Operated
Was
Invested
Turned
Forced
Heard
Caused
Shown
Alleged
Killed
Seized
Included
Caught
Were
Was
Reviewed
Lobbied
Responded
Was
Discovered
Was
Estimated
Published
Found
Studied
Was




















Was - 5
Heard - 2
 Responded - 2
Rises
Be
Step
Starting
Ensuring
Runs
Taking
Standing
Becoming
Begins
Look
See
Notice
Heading
See
Following
Falling
Falling
Run
Find
Lying
Pick
Feel
Knowing
Began
Operating
Surpassing
Sitting
Houses
Reflect
Operating
Provide
Reach
Ignite
Singing
Ran
Starting
Criticize
Citing
Researching
Lies
Show
Be
Allowing
Remains
Reducing
Making
Are

Are - 4
Be - 2
Operate - 2
Run - 2
See - 2
Find - 2
Starting - 2
Will
Predict
Will
Remain













































Will - 2

After reviewing my draft, it is incredibly clear that both the present and past tense verbs are very common in my verb usage. While I believe this helps show the whole story, there are some points at which the verb usage switches back and forth, which may confuse the reader. However, I think that using both past events and present day realities do help the reader understand how the controversy evolved over time.

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