As a reader, having multiple pronouns can be incredibly confusing, so it's best to keep them to a minimum. Did I end up doing that?
CollegeDegrees360 "Confused" 7/12/12 via flickr. Public Domain.
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
you (reader)
it (bird)
it (bird)
you (reader)
it (bird)
it (bird)
it (bird)
it (bird)
you (reader)
their (bird)
who (environmental groups)
it (Ivanpah Solar Power)
it (Palen Solar Plant)
it (Palen Solar Plant)
their (bird)
who (environmental groups)
it (Ivanpah Solar Power)
it (Palen Solar Plant)
it (Palen Solar Plant)
them (BrightSource Energy Inc)
it (solar power)
it (solar power)
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