Original Closing - Rough Draft Closing (8:02 - 8:22)
How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?
I think that by establishing a call to action to the viewer that it makes it a more effective ending since I'm asking to the reader to do something they may not have thought about before watching.
How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?
By adding some different graphics and better narration, I believe that the viewer will be more engaged when the call to action comes than they were before.
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