Now that we're all getting started on our new projects, it's a good idea to give some feedback. This week I reviewed the pre-production phase project work of Emily Bond, entitled "Content Outline."
An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed
I chose to review their content outline, which is a general guideline by which their project will be structured, and the evidence and points that they're going to make. My comments can be found here.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback
I think that by providing exact sources for their evidence, it'll be easier for them to both reference the evidence for themselves and to have to the reader / listener possibly look into the source. Also, by having a solid opening they can grab the viewer's attention more effectively than a statistic.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback
When looking at all of the genre examples, the opening was often something flashy or interesting rather than just starting directly with a voice over.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from
I like the way that Emily plans to include a lot of statistics and evidence within her project, and think that this could be nice to have for myself, but know that it's tough to have some of those things for my specific argument.
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