Original Intro - New Intro (0:00 - 0:53)
How did the content change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the content is being communicated more effectively in the re-edited version?
After the first video segment, the introduction changed because I made the goal of the video more clear by telling viewers that it's time to find the cause, rather than introducing only the general topic.
How did the form change (even slightly - details matter!) when you re-edited it? Why do you think the form is presenting the content more effectively in the re-edited version?
I edited the video to show a secondary clip of Alwaki rather than having a static image because I believed it would be far more interesting to the viewer than just a regular picture.
Hey, Coby. I did peer review for this editorial post. Here is the link. Hope it helps.
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