To help give feedback to other students in the course and find out some new things myself, I'm reviewing Alexis Morrison's "Production Report A."
An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed
I'll be reviewing Alexis's first production report, or a rough draft of one piece of their project so far. In her case, it was My comments can be found here.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback
I think that by providing a couple of content and copy editing suggestions, it will help to make the piece stronger overall and more clearly define the piece.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback
When looking at the genre examples for standard college essays, the introduction paragraphs are usually very specific, and focus on one very specific topic rather than something broader.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from
I like the way that they produced their own quote to work from, and showed how that thinking could be adapted to fit their argument.
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