So, now that I've gotten some of my own work done, let's take a look at PJ Noghrehchi's essay entitled "Serenading at the University of Arizona: A Promotion of Rape Culture or A 21st Century Expression of Entertainment for All?" You can find my comments here.
An explanation of the peer review activity you selected for the project you reviewed
I'll be reviewing PJ's rough draft of his college essay, where I'll be making a couple of suggestions about the form that he uses while writing.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback
I think that PJ has a strong start but can use a bit more refinement and maybe even a bit more formal tone when writing to help more accurately portray his points.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback
After looking at the genre examples on D2L, it was apparent that there was often 2-3 sentences of explanation for each quote, but that was not always the case in PJ's work.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from
They added a very personal touch to their story which I thought was very interesting, and helped make the story seem more real.
I'll be reviewing PJ's rough draft of his college essay, where I'll be making a couple of suggestions about the form that he uses while writing.
An explanation of how you think you helped the author with your feedback
I think that PJ has a strong start but can use a bit more refinement and maybe even a bit more formal tone when writing to help more accurately portray his points.
An explanation of how you incorporated something from the suggested Student’s Guide readings (or any other course materials, if you’d prefer) into your feedback
After looking at the genre examples on D2L, it was apparent that there was often 2-3 sentences of explanation for each quote, but that was not always the case in PJ's work.
One thing about their work that you admired or think you could learn from
They added a very personal touch to their story which I thought was very interesting, and helped make the story seem more real.
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